Mr Horse72
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"I am not part of the dark, simply deeper in the shadows." -Quinlan Vos
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Post by Mr Horse72 on Oct 20, 2008 17:16:59 GMT -5
i have a basic story draft for a series of clone war chronicles.
the first story will take place somewhere on geonosis, and the next few storys will center around other battles and adventures.
i have the first story draft ready to type out and experiment with.
after the first story, i will need some ideas from you guys that i can use for future chronicles. anybody who posts ideas that i will use will have a clone trooper nicknamed after them that i can add to the chronicles.
keep this thread open, and keep an eye out for a short rough draft of the story real soon. once its been finally edited, i will post them on fanfiction.net.
EDIT: and i have come up with a name for the clone legion that i will use:
the 118th.
or...
the 313th
the reason of selecting these names i will explain if you guys want.
vote on your favorite number and iwill tally up the votes.
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Mr Horse72
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Post by Mr Horse72 on Oct 20, 2008 18:14:51 GMT -5
wow, i already just finished a part of my draft.
here it is....
remember, its only a rough draft, so its bound to have maybe some symbol mistakes or grammer problems. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++=
*THE CLONE CHRONICLES*
clones: LBX-90(main)
"I have a bad feeling about this" i thought. As me and my legion of 190's descend from the safety of the Attack Cruiser and entered the atmosphere of the rocky planet of geonosis. It was a bumpy ride making a landing on the rough surface. As we departed from the Republic Carrier, we joined up with two more groups from 467 and 878.
"Alright troopers line up!" barked the commander of the 878. "The objective of our mission is to lay siege on a Droid Command Post. And withen the CP's computers,is tactical data on other droid bases and factories across the galaxy." Every clone around me shifted some from feeling a little nervous. I cant blame them, it IS our first mission of course.
"The group from the 190's will provide covering fire for the 878's,while the 467's will take up check points across the ridge as we go through it." Before anbody could ask a question, our captain shouted out orders to us, as we take the lead.
After about 10 minutes of marching through the canyon's ridge, we recieve word that we have taken out two of the Droid's Battleships when they were taking off. I heard the first one was shot down by Master Yoda's troopers.
"Geez it hot on this chunk of rock." Complained one of the troopers. He did not have to say that twice, we were all feeling the effects. "We are not far from the CP. Everybody take five" said the clone commander. As the Medics passed around water, the Commander brings up a HoloMap detailing the ridge. "when we reach the CP, the 878's will take point and enter from the front. The 190's will serve as back up, while the remaining 467's enter from the back."
said the Commander pointing towards the holographic detail of the command building. "After they clear outmost of the tin cans,the 190's can enter and provide cover while the 878's gather the holocron data of the other bases and factories. After that, we proceed out of the ridge, and meet back with the Carrier. Any questions?"
silence...
"Ok troopers you hear him!! lets move ou--GAAGH!!!" Before he could finish, our captain was struck by blaster fire straight through the chest....
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Mr Horse72
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Post by Mr Horse72 on Oct 22, 2008 18:43:12 GMT -5
bump
keep voting, 2 votes are not enough.
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Post by Sir Ewoksrule91 on Oct 22, 2008 19:18:43 GMT -5
A bump after 29 minutes is not necessary.
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Post by Revan on Oct 22, 2008 23:48:14 GMT -5
personally i like the 501st legion but thats not one of my choices...
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Post by baseball203 on Oct 23, 2008 5:26:58 GMT -5
A bump after 29 minutes is not necessary. it was a two day and 29 minute bump... ~*~Baseball 203~*~
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Mr Horse72
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Post by Mr Horse72 on Oct 23, 2008 6:39:35 GMT -5
personally i like the 501st legion but thats not one of my choices... aye, but thats been taken. i am aiming for the 2nd best group(thats made up of course.) btw, the 118th is my nickname, lunchboxx and the 313 is the runescape or of jedi knights. i added them up from number form (ex: A=1 B=2 C=3 etc etc.)
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Post by Sikita on Oct 24, 2008 14:17:04 GMT -5
i like your story, it is interresting. >.>
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Post by Sir Ewoksrule91 on Oct 24, 2008 17:05:52 GMT -5
A bump after 29 minutes is not necessary. it was a two day and 29 minute bump... ~*~Baseball 203~*~ Whoops... either way it wasn't like it was down on the list.
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